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The Things I Love and Hate About You
written by Writermadman
09:03 PM 4/6/05
The Things I Love and Hate About You

Your black and wavy hair, your gorgeous blue eyes…
Your sweet assuring voice says to me “I love you!” But I only come to realize…
That I can see right through your shallow lies!
You played me like a fiddle…maybe you did like me just a little!
But now I can’t be sure, it’s sad I had to learn…
That love hurts, and your essence touches mine and then begins to burn!
I love you, and you said that you love me, but it was just a flirt!
And I must tell you darlin’, that really, really hurt!

I’m not sure where to start, now that you’ve broken my heart.
But I stay open, praying there’s a chance, and I perform this tiresome dance!
If there’s love between us tell me so, but if not just let me go!
So I can live my life, and go on broken through my strife!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hehe! A poem a wrote about my ex :p

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by KiNkY_BloNdE! (4-7-2005 - 06:10 PM)
thats rly gd. write more!

by koolgurlhere (4-19-2005 - 09:17 PM)
great poem...keep the gd wk up...

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