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cOMMENTS
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
09:08 PM 4/6/05
smashing the hearts
of those who don't cry
in the serum
just let me die
beat me instead
craving the lies
with content rage
of the do or die
litteraly watching your life pass by
the drugs slow it down
you forbiddenly try
sitting there being so boldly shy
knowing it all
in one ignorant try
lieing there,
holding your breathe while your sigh
not enough time
in this eternal life
modestly bleeding
in your own graceful strife
you haven't a mark
as your skin cuts the knife
talking alone
in the glaring bright night


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c0mM3Nt5!!!!

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