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BEAT ME INSTEAD(COMMENTS)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
01:54 AM 4/7/05
this is for my little brothers


beat me instead of them
till eyes are bloody red
and i suffice

take all there pain away
save for another
can't afford to die

they're tears would end my life
please don't let them cry
i hold mine back in spite

save 'em no matter what
they'll never see a cut
or know how you tried

so it's better dead under water
then to live up there
i'll just take the pain away
the pain they can't bare
they'll never know of what you do
or how to hurt them you dared
so beat me instead of them
on their heads don't touch a hair

i'll take them away from this
they'll have ignorant bliss
with no lies

take them to a place
of old childhood days
and no black skies

with me they will grow strong
they'll know rite from wrong
never will tears flood they'r eyes

beat me instead of them
they'll each my preciouse gems
let them sleep tonight


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
SOME DAY I'M GOING TO GIVE THIS TO MY LITTLE BROTHERS, THEY'RE MORE MINE THEN NE ONE ELSES, I'LL NEVER LET MY PARENTS HURT THEM

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by babycutter_17 (4-7-2005 - 07:03 PM)
that is so sad

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