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» Poem: Love dies
Love dies
written by cryptic_misery
12:41 AM 8/4/04
Why are they separating?
How I wonder.

Every night I lay awake
and shed the tears I cry

Every time he leaves the room,
she sits and stares and sighs

Why can't they just get along?
Do they even try?

How can they say they love eachother?
When they know it's a lie

Why can't all people get along?
And why does love just...die...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
More 7th grade blues haha. This was when my parents where separating...and I didn't understand they're needs to be apart.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (8-5-2004 - 10:10 AM)
Very good!... i don't really have much to say except how awestruck i was when i read this... you really wrote this in 7th grade? wow

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