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» Poem: A Heartful Of Emptiness
A Heartful Of Emptiness
written by YouSmileAs_I_Die
03:37 AM 4/7/05
We pass by like perfect strangers

Ever since the day I let my guard down

We stopped speaking like friends and took up the facade

Of the closest enemies

Don't you know that I'd give everything I have

To take it all back?

I want to just let go of the feelings I've had for you

With all of my scarred and broken heart

Because that's all I've got left from the six months

I've wasted on you

I want to forget about the sleepless nights I've spent thinking of you

And wishing you were here with me

When I know that could never happen

Because of the way I've chosen to live my life

So now, we're even farther apart than when we first began

Yet the jealousy I've felt since the start hasn't waned at all

It's still there, rearing its ugly head everytime I see you

Talking to him

It's not fair that I could spend six months

Willing to take a long walk off of a short cliff just to

Hold your hand

And he can come out of nowhere, not knowing what the hell he feels

And take you from me

Even though you were never really mine at all


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i posted this once before then revised it and posted it again...some of the lines in here are over used and the over-all message of it is kinda old and tired also

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» Comments / Feedback
by cuttie (4-7-2005 - 03:43 AM)
i like it

by butcakes (4-7-2005 - 07:02 AM)
this is like me and my gf... wow! its our 6 months 2morra, but we are kinda sliding downhill... i just hope things change... =D

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