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Little by little, bit by bit
written by xfadingmemoriesx05:34 AM 4/7/05Little by little,
I start to sway.
Sweet things turn bitter,
on this sunny day.
Bit by bit,
I'm starting to fall.
Tears leak,
as I lose it all. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hehh.. I know it's not a good poem, I wrote it in like... SECONDS. LOL. I got forced to write it in class cause my friend was so freakin bored. And I didn't have any inspiration then. xD Comments are welcomed. x] Critisms too.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by butcakes (4-7-2005 - 05:36 AM)
| nah its cool for what it is... it is constant... flowing... and raw. i like it =D |
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