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Guitar
written by butcakes05:35 AM 4/7/05Her curves enticing
Half a dozen strands of hair bring familiar vibrations
caressing her neck resounds her sweetness
she is under your juresdiction |
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when i first showed this poem to my friends, i didnt tell them it was about a guitar, and they were like "that isnt like you to say stuff like that!!" but then when i told them it was about a guitar, they fully understood and thought it was good... i like my guitar =D
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (4-7-2005 - 05:38 AM)
| Ehehehe. I would've thought that way too if you didn't say. ;P Anyways. Good poem. It's simple, and I like it. |
by (guest) (4-7-2005 - 06:34 AM)
| bithin dog , u should get htis published at whaterver costs |
by Bella_Stella (4-8-2005 - 02:58 PM)
| Hee, hee. Real smooth, Me likes.
I have written a poem about a guitar before, though I think yours is twice as good. *Thumbs up* |
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