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Revenge
written by The Black Halo09:11 AM 4/7/05If I were the weather,
I'd rain on your parade.
Crimson droplets would pound your face.
They'd hit you so hard
You'd feel what I felt
With every blow.
I'd be the thick fog that blocks the sun,
So you'd live in constant darkness.
I'd be the rumbling thunder that
Taunts you,
Teases you,
Laughs at you.
Just what you deserve.
I'd be the wind,
And I'd blow your hopes away,
Just like you did with mine.
I'd be the sun that glows so hot
It burns your skin.
It'd boil your blood,
And you'd die from the heat...
The day the weather gets revenge. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (4-7-2005 - 10:56 AM)
by butcakes (4-7-2005 - 11:37 AM)
| thats a good poem... i like the idea... but revenge is for those who cannot forgive and make themselves live in pain because of it |
by crazymunkeyluva (4-8-2005 - 04:43 PM)
| amazing poem, i like the first part... so violent :)
-sara |
by DemonSlayer (4-11-2005 - 03:26 PM)
| I like this one too. Your a great poet. |
by alone_in_my_head (4-20-2005 - 07:12 PM)
| great first verse truely poetrific |
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