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My Pit Of Sorrow
written by winterdragon131312:42 PM 4/7/05Suddenly appears with a wide,
To come down or go inside.
From walking along a haunted road,
With moss covered trees that climb and grow.
Darken water that draws me near,
Thunder that sounds and look like a spear.
The pit of sorrows it's bear to hear,
Their cries can shake me from mind of my sorrow.
Something black-a coffin-crashed donw,
Bones sticks out and none was never found.
Piture that shows my scary life,
Is this true?
Or I have no life. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by poetic_tragity_x (4-7-2005 - 12:52 PM)
| It was good.
But not great.
:-P
-Kelsey. |
by winterdragon1313 (4-18-2005 - 02:41 PM)
| Well, if that what u think. I think I should re-write this one and make a new one.(Any Comments from n-e-body?) |
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