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» Poem: just cry (comments plz!!!)
just cry (comments plz!!!)
written by unlovedandinlove
09:19 PM 4/7/05
it only hurts on the inside until u let it out,
the more you hold it in the darker your tears become,
finally after everything black tears run through your dreams,
after a while thats all you can think about,
the only way to escape your horrid life is to use drugs or cut,
the only thing is your friends care,
they keep asking you to let them help,
but you dont so now your all alone,
now you let it out,
at the one time you have nobody,
you finally break down.

you tell your therapist everything so he bakeracts you,
your stuck thers no escape now,
if only you still had the great friends you used to,
then you wouldnt be so lonly,
well you brought this apon yourself,
so deal with it :'-(


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» Comments / Feedback
by good*angel*slapper*1101 (4-7-2005 - 09:37 PM)
that was great!!!!!

by (guest) (4-7-2005 - 09:51 PM)
that was beautiful...it made me realize a lot of things thanx...i felt lyk it was bout me cuz i have experienced that...n i cried(lol) its reaali good

by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 02:09 AM)
Thats really good....good job!

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