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smashing unbreakable(commentsplz+thank u
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP09:54 PM 4/7/05smashing unbreakable hearts
of those with wet cheecks don't cry
in the crimson invisible serum
please just let me die
beat me instead
craving the lies
happily rageing
of the do or die
un-noticebly watching your life pass by
the drugs slow it down
you forbiddenly fry
sitting there being so boldly shy
knowing it all
in one ignorant try
lieing therestanding
holding your breathe while your sigh
not enough time
in this eternal life
gracefully bleeding
in your own modest strife
you haven't a mark
as your skin cuts the knife
talking alone
in the glaring bright night
not even moving
while you stand there and fight
blindly searching
for loose love fitting tight
never letting in
the rays of black light |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
don't really know??? comments plz and thank you, yes there's alot of oppisites,if you get it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by porkchop_chick (4-7-2005 - 10:00 PM)
| I really like it, the details just bring a person inside the poems,makes a person relate to the feelings in this poem. |
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