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Waiting for a answer (comments please)
written by porkchop_chick09:57 PM 4/7/05I've waited months,
Waited months for u,
Waited with nothing but LOVE in my heart,
My heart telling me ur just busy,
My mind telling me u just don't care for me nomore,
Listening to my heart,
Knowing that was my mistake,
A mistake I would soon regret,
I get the news,
But not from u,
But from ur own flesh and blood,
U tell ur cousin and best friend,
U tell her u just don't care for me nomore,
In a hurry she calls me,
I knew the moment I picked up the phone,
That this was it,
The moment I would finally know,
The day I found out thats u...
U just don't LOVE me nomore. |
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Hope u like it please comment, I would like to know hows my wrting so far.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by redwolf (4-7-2005 - 10:00 PM)
by worldsgrtst0717 (4-7-2005 - 10:01 PM)
| real good poem and Im sorry you feel that way, I hope things clear up |
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