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Your Goodbye (plz comment)
written by SinGurl10:41 PM 4/7/05You and me .. Fullmoon madness..
Love we used to share'n leave,
For the moment i saw your kindness..
Like a field of lies that i believe,
Nor me neither you have succeed..
To leave the whole idea of love,
For your warmth i still need..
And you only lookin at me from above,
Why can't you see me dyin' ?
Maybe you are actin' blind...
Why can't you hear me cryin' ?
Maybe that am left behind..
Furthermore, i'm still here..
watchin' you holdin' her arms,
Nevertheless, i feel no fear..
Coz one day you'll rotten with worms,
Sufferin' the lonliness - catchin' hands
With hope that rarely lands.. |
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why do i feel the whole shits while he's havin fun !!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XVietxBunnEhX (4-7-2005 - 10:48 PM)
| :O that was a good poem.. i feel ur pain.. well kinda i feel half of it but :') good very good poem i luv it |
by porkchop_chick (4-7-2005 - 10:53 PM)
| Yes I feel u completely, I feel that way also. This was a good poem, good job. |
by (guest) (4-7-2005 - 11:25 PM)
| I liked it, you are very good...Good job...^.^; |
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