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Falling (Please Comment)
written by porkchop_chick
10:51 PM 4/7/05
Yes its true I fall,
Im falling,
I fall but only falling into trouble,
I fell into his parents,
I was cursed to stand there,
And take the HIT while they disapproved of us,
I stood there taking the PUNCH,
While u were out,
HIDING from the REAL world,
All those BLOWS
Directed to my POOR HEART,
I still went on my journey falling,
I fell bleeding internally from the blows,
He grabs my hand and held it,
Inside im DIEING in tears
Been tring to rehabilitate myself,
From the VERY strong blows that I indored,
Then it comes... time goes by so QUICKLY,
It felt like it was not enough,
9:00 pm hits time to let his hand go,
I let go,
knowing i'd never hold it the same way again,
I waved GOOD BYE
And put my head down and walked home,
A thrash to the HEART permently damaging it,
I should have known,
Of course he's going to change,
And of course,
He's not going to change in a POSSITIVE way,
Im learning in this HORRIBLE fall,
That im not soon to COMPLETE,
That no matter wut its only ME...MYSELF...AND I,
Theres no way to get wut u want
When u dont even know wut u want.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Well i mhoping that anyonw who sees this will take some time out and read the whole thing, I put alot of time and heart in this, please comment.

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