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» Poem: Pain Cuttin' My Vein
Pain Cuttin' My Vein
written by SinGurl
11:04 PM 4/7/05
You and me .. Fullmoon madness..
Love we used to share'n leave,
For the moment i saw your kindness..
Like a field of lies that i believe,

Nor me neither you have succeed..
To leave the whole idea of love,
For your warmth i still need..
And you only lookin at me from above,

Why can't you see me dyin' ?
Maybe you are actin' blind...
Why can't you hear me cryin' ?
Maybe that am left behind..

Furthermore, i'm still here..
watchin' you holdin' her arms,
Nevertheless, i feel no fear..
Coz one day you'll rotten with worms,

Sufferin' the lonliness - catchin' hands
With hope that rarely lands..


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
have u ever been in this ? how does it feel ? is commettin suicide still a good solution ?!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by XxXlost_girl_in_loveXxX (4-8-2005 - 12:44 AM)
i've been in this before and as a self mutilator sometimes i did fell like taking my own life but in the end i was happy to be alive and so no i dont think it is the way to go..it will get better trust me

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