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» Poem: love lost to those in hate
love lost to those in hate
written by rayikari
11:09 PM 4/7/05
nothing left to us...
nothing left at all...
you threw my hand aside...
all i did was love you...
you didnt care...
you shut me out...
loving for a time then passing by...
you left me standing...
i stand alone...
standing in the doorway...
watching as you go away...
without a second glance...
a silent tear sliding down my cheek...
no one to brush it aside for me...


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broke up...

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» Comments / Feedback
by porkchop_chick (4-7-2005 - 11:15 PM)
Damn thats exactly how im feeling now. I've went through the same kind of relationship and it just ended just like that not to long ago a week or two ago. This is really good I relate to this alot.

by XxheartbrokenxX (4-7-2005 - 11:32 PM)
thats sad. i know how u feel.

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