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LOVE VACCINE(comment)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
01:46 AM 4/8/05
i'll sing you that lullabye
that one that always makes you cry
and when you do i feel i could die
just so your face would always be dry
please don't sedate me
don't even try
don't degrate
just tell me lies
give me your most honest deception
to fall out of love
hears that perscription
it works just like a disenfectant
just inject 6 times
every hour
just like a vaccine
of dead loves flower
with this drug
it gives you power
slowly making the serum get shallow
your hearts overtaken
with a disease so foul
just take the lullabye,vaccine,
and catch your blood on a towel
your heart being shattered
is loves minor sideaffect
but don't worry
after this
you'll never feel it again


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CoMmEnTs PlEaSe!1

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» Comments / Feedback
by *.:emo_lover:.* (4-8-2005 - 01:50 AM)
Since you helped me out i will help you out. Thanx for the advice i will do that tomorrow when i see them. I would rather do that in person. I really appricate that. but anyways your poem is really good. I really liked it. I am not just sayin that because you commented me. I truely honestly liked your poem. once again thanx for the advice.

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