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» Poem: Touching of love story...
Touching of love story...
written by storms
04:39 PM 4/8/05
From the very beginning,
girl's family objected
strongly on her dating this guy,
saying that it has got to do

with family background,
that the girl will have to suffer
for the rest of her life
if she were to be with him.

Due to family's pressure,
the couple quarreled very often.
Though the girl loved the guy deeply,
she always asked him:

how deep is your love for me?'

As the guy is not good with his words,
this often caused the girl
to be very upset. With that
the family's pressure,

the gal often vents
her anger on him.
As for him..
he only endured it in silence.

After a couple of years,
the guy finally graduated
decided to further
his studies overseas.

Before leaving,
he proposed to the gal:
I'm not very good with words.
But all I know is that I love you.

If you allow me, I will take care
of you for the rest of my life.
As for your family, I'll try my best
to talk them round. Will you marry me?'

The girl agreed, with the guy's determination,
the family finally gave in
agreed to let them get married.
So before he left, they got engaged.

The gal went out to the working society,
whereas the guy was overseas, continuing his studies.
They sent their love through emails or phone calls.
Though it was hard, but both never thought of giving up.

One day, while the gal was
on her way to work,
she was knocked down
by a car that lost control.

When she woke up, she saw her parents
beside her bed. She realized
that she was badly injured.
Seeing her mum cry,

she wanted to comfort her. But she
realized that all that could
come out of her mouth was
just a sigh. she had lost her voice....

The doctor says that the impact
on her brain has caused
her to lose her voice.
Listening to her parent's comfort,

but with nothing coming out
from her, she broke down.
During the stay in hospital,
besides silent cry..

it's still just silent cry
that accompanied her.
Upon reaching home,
everything seems to be the same.

Except for the ringing tone
of the phone
which pierced into her heart
every time it rang.

She does not wish to let the guy know
not wanting to be a burden to him,
she wrote a letter to him saying
that she does not wish to wait any longer.

With that, she sent the ring
back to him. In return,
the guy sent a millions
of reply and countless phone calls..

all the gal could do
besides crying is still crying....
The parents decided to move away, hoping
that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.

With a new environment,
the gal learns sign language
started a new life.
Telling herself everyday

that she must forget the guy. One day,
her friend came told her
that he's back. She asked her friend
not to let him know what happened to her.

Since then, there wasn't
anymore news of him.
A year has passed
her friend came with an envelope,

containing an invitation card
for the guy's wedding.
The gal was shattered.
When she opened the letter,

she saw her name on it instead.
When she was about to ask her
friend what was going on, she saw
the guy standing in front of her....

He used sign language to tell her,
I've spent a year to learn sign language.
Just to let you know that
I've not forgotten our promise.

Let me have the chance
to be your voice. I Love You.'
With that, he slipped the ring
back into her finger. The gal finally smiled.....


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» Comments / Feedback
by Jonismyeternallove (4-8-2005 - 04:42 PM)
it was very sweet and i loved it it is making me cry for how sweet it is, i absolutely loved it, write more like that they are your best

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