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» Poem: pain
pain
written by my_wrists_are_bleeding
05:30 PM 4/8/05
they try to teach us happiness
because they know nothing of pain
sitting alone in the dark
your only friend is a sharp knife
your enjoyment is to watch the blood drip free
while you wish you were free from the pain
you cant predict anything
except more darkness
the demons consume you
you penetrate through the light
and stay in the shadows
we suffer from ignorance
we stay in darkness and disassociate
soon our wish will come
all rise to what we bring
outstretched hands
unfolded wings....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Our souls rise to the cosmos and we become One with what has given us lives and minds and emotions... but we must wait and see who the Divine is.(sorry i stole it but it makes since) lol this poem is about how most people on earth have pain and all that

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» Comments / Feedback
by gothia (4-8-2005 - 05:52 PM)
i really like this poem! i loved all the metaphors and that kind of shit!! it was great and keep writing

by Manson_Lover15 (4-9-2005 - 08:37 PM)
i love this poem! it was great.

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