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windblown (plz comment)
written by breakmyheart05:33 PM 4/8/05a crazy notion
bloomed in the back of my head
a thought that made my eyes
glaze over.
the paper couldn't capture it.
the pen burst at the feel of it.
my words faultered
trying to express it
and it's silk slipped by
one more time. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cassie_otten (4-8-2005 - 07:16 PM)
| i really liked this poem. although i thought that the title was improper. I think that with your poetic mind you would be able to come up with a better suited title. I thought that the ideas in the poem were amazing. THey were entrancing and caused me to think. I liked your poem. |
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