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You'll Never See (Comment Please)
written by beautiful_let_down07:07 PM 4/8/05The thing about me is you never get quite what you see...no body ever takes the time to actually get to know me. The way that I act happy...it's all just put on. Deep inside of me what I feel is so strong. I don't know what it is...maybe I'm lying to myself. You'll never know with what problems I've dealt.
You think that I'm fine...have a normal adverage life. But everyday that goes by I deal with more and more strife. Everything back then went wrong and I thought I was to blame...all the pain that I'm feeling feels like I'm going insane. God please...help me...for I know not what to do. I'm lost everyday lord, please tell me what to do.
I guess it'd just be easier if I disappeared for good, no one would really miss me. Probably only my sister would. So I'm ending it now Lord...I'm sorry for what I've done. I'm trying hard now...I'm trying not to run...run away from what I feel I need to do. I'm holding this gun to my head and no one even has a clue. So when someone finds me...I'll only tell you this, Mom, Dad? I've killed myself I've been driven to my death. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Writermadman (4-8-2005 - 07:09 PM)
| This is a pretty good poem...very tragic, the formatting, paragraphing and etc. are a bit confusing but very nice poem! |
by forevrfalen4 (4-9-2005 - 07:06 AM)
| ive been there believe me suicide isnt worth it no matter what... otherwise good poem |
by shadysgrld5 (4-23-2005 - 12:23 AM)
| ive felt like this before.. but trust me.. people wil miss u.. i might not cause i dont kno u lol but im sure u got a bff they'll miss u.. i had a gun to my head! dont go thru w/ it! |
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