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dark waters*please comment*
written by rayikari10:26 PM 4/8/05engulfing my very body...
i swim in the Sights of my mind...
i see things other dont...
i prophesize!!
dark waters consuming me...
i only wish to breathe!!
i choke and try to srcream...
no sound can be uttered from my mouth...
no sound except that of the Gods voices...
lost in Their Sights!
engulfed in darkness...
flames licking at my face!!
no longer can i breathe! |
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inspiration from my book...The Firebrand
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| » Comments / Feedback | by irregular (4-23-2005 - 10:47 AM)
| it's not bad, but try to make it a bit better. please comment on mine |
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