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Killed In A Gang
written by bloody_tears_girl01:05 AM 4/9/05she thought they were her friends,
she fell for their shit again,
walking around the streets with guns and knives,
people were in fear when they arrived.
i learned my lesson, but she didn't understand,
instead of mine, she took his hand,
all she wanted was to stand out,
she didn't know what gangs were about.
and now she's dead,
but they just laughed instead,
cuz they are the ones who took her life,
she thought she was loved, but she wasn't right. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about my best friend who got killed and a gang rage. i was in the gang too, but got out of it and tried to get her to do the same thing. i guess i should've tried harder.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XVietxBunnEhX (4-9-2005 - 01:07 AM)
| Awsome poem...i loved it ^_^ but i also feel sorry for ur best friend did u cry when she died? =( |
by Writermadman (4-9-2005 - 01:10 AM)
| My god that was beautiful...very deep! Don't even know what to say... |
by bloody_tears_girl (4-9-2005 - 01:12 AM)
| of course i cried, and still do, it was only like 3 months ago.:( |
by XVietxBunnEhX (4-9-2005 - 01:14 AM)
| Very nice beautiful poem i want to be creative like u i gotta give u props |
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