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» Poem: please commet "give u back it all"
please commet "give u back it all"
written by Suicidal_tears
03:19 AM 4/9/05
im sick of smiling when its only fake
im sick of this pain of my heart breaking
why cant u just sticth me back together like b4?
my hearts beating faster n bleeding even harder
waiting for your touch once more
youve created me n u also smashed me aoart

ill give u back what uve created
but only if u lvoe me once moree
memories of us stand strong in my mind
wishing i never met u so i wouldnt b in tears,
wishing my pain would disappear

stitch me back together
because my entire life n body is falling apart
everynight i sit up n cry
because you took everything that was me
i no longer can smile n laugh
because i cant feel anything anymore

every second with out u im more of a mes
im trying so hard 2 4get u
but i seem to not b getting very far
because ur just sitting there watching me fall


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by BLOODYHANDS (4-9-2005 - 04:59 AM)
very good i m going through the same thing

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