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» Poem: loss of control!
loss of control!
written by Jimmy_Lippstikk
11:19 AM 4/9/05
i'm slipping i'm falling
loss of control
i left her there
loss of control
i'm wakin in the middle of the night
loss of control
i'll never have more fright
loss of control
they killed my mind
loss of control
when i left her that night!
loss of control
killed her with an iron fist
loss of control
LOSS OF CONTROL!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
don't let anything get ya down..... it sucks!

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by mishy0077 (4-9-2005 - 11:23 AM)
wow! i felt it

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