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Love-ache
written by Gistle06:45 PM 4/9/05I had loved you so much.
I had longed for your touch.
And every night we were parted.
I had felt empty hearted.
I smiled at your picture when you were away.
And when you came back, I would hope you would stay.
But you were a busy person, with no time to waste.
Even you kisses began to show haste.
You began to work later than you would usually.
And more and more I began to feel lonely.
Worries ran through my mind of you cheating on me.
But I thought back to the good times and tried to think positivly.
Now that I know you left me for somebody else.
Though my heart hurts, I cry, and I feel so left out.
Though my love-ache for you feels at it's worst.
I will move on, and I will leave you with her.
I loved you like no one else ever had.
And though no words could ever describe the feelings I have.
I won't hold you back- I will let you go on.
Just as I will, though my love-ache lingers on. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Okay, this is my first poem ya'll. I'm not even sure if I'm putting this in the right catagory O_O;
Oh well, find it in your heart to forgive the Gistle-Mister. I'm new at this whole poetry thing. ^___^
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bright_shadow (4-9-2005 - 07:01 PM)
| i thought u did a good job for a first time
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