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Daggers (comment plz)
written by speiamcial07:25 PM 4/9/05No matter how hard I try
The things you say hurt
I know you don't realize
Exactly what you are doing
Your words stab me
Each one a dagger
Slowly killing me
As my pain pours out
The scars cover me
There is no part of me
Without pain
Everyday
I can't take it anymore
I have had enough
My tears of blood
Will end |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
no matter how hard i try i just cant forget
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mizbeehaven182 (4-9-2005 - 08:02 PM)
| i like it alot. very desciptive. look at my poem and tell me what you think of it. |
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