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Pitty...
written by Manson_Lover1508:30 PM 4/9/05What happens when you're dying
and no one's crying?
No one cares,
your life, they will not spare.
You wonder why.
You start to cry.
They just look past,
their feelings of love did not last.
You feel the worlds gone crazy.
You think-mabye it's just a dream.
But you can't wake up.
This pain you feel will not be made up.
This is real,
you're never gonna' wake up.. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cuttie (4-9-2005 - 08:38 PM)
by mansonlover91 (4-9-2005 - 08:45 PM)
by cloey (4-10-2005 - 09:15 PM)
| I know the feeling in this poem. i have felt it over and over again. you are a good poet and help people know other feel the way that they do.
may the gods be with you.
blessed be |
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