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Mommie and Daddy(please comment)
written by hiddensoul11:22 PM 4/9/05mommie always did it.
Daddy did it to.
Now that Im all grown up,and smart, i do that same shit too.
Mommie always bitched and fussed
Daddy always slapped.
A new woman every night,
i would sit on her lap.
Mommie didn't like it.
Daddy didn't care.
He'd hit and slapp and cuss,
and pull out all her hair.
Mommie got fed up one day and took a little trip.
She went and bought a gun to shoot off daddy's dick.
When mommie came home she was shocked to see daddy on the floor.
He was lying there sick as a dog cussing at one of his whores.
Mommie flipped out and started to yell in rage.
Then a shot went off and that was the end of my daddys days.
Mommie looked at the woman crawling on the carpet,
Spat on her and kicked her in her stomache.
Another shot range out and that other lady died too.
Then mommie turned to me and said i love you,
That was all my mommie said before she took her life. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ForEverLonley (4-9-2005 - 11:25 PM)
| holy shit, u wrote that?, its amazing |
by mansonlover91 (4-9-2005 - 11:36 PM)
| oh shit. thats really good. |
by outofmymind (4-9-2005 - 11:37 PM)
by blackrose777 (4-10-2005 - 12:04 AM)
by REALEYES.REALiZE.REALLiES (4-10-2005 - 01:31 AM)
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