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I Am So In Love With You
written by brokenxsmile02:52 AM 4/10/05I am so in love with you.
And it is so hard to explain
But whenever I see you
I feel a little bit more relaxed
I feel happy; as if nothing's wrong
And you make it so there is nothing wrong
All you have to do is smile
I feel so good inside; special and loved
Everything I've regretted about my past
Everything that I've screwed up on
It's all been erased since you came along
And you make it feel like I'm perfect
Like I haven't made any mistakes
All the lying, the cutting, the cheating
I'm a new person because of you
You've changed me around and made me so grateful
You made me realize that I am beautiful
And that I do have a pretty good life
You are everything to me, you have no idea
What you've done for me and how much I appreciate you
You're always there, thank you so much
I swear to God I will always love you
You complete me, you're my better half
And I am so in love with you. |
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dedicated to my baby... i love you Brandon!
01-26-05
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| » Comments / Feedback | by buffy (4-10-2005 - 02:57 AM)
by zver (4-10-2005 - 07:32 AM)
| umm im not soo inlove wiht u but u know maybe when im done wiht this relationship * brushed dirt of hishoulder* yea see this is how ppl feel about me |
by Confused_Girl (4-11-2005 - 01:21 AM)
| Hey I loved the poem, it was wonderful. I can relate to it so much right now. I am in a relationship and i feel the exact same wat towards him. It is like you have put my feelings and wrote them down. Thank you so much. Keep up the great work! |
by leadvox1988 (4-11-2005 - 02:03 AM)
| 1st!!! Sweet!! I love you baby so damn much, Thank you for the poem. I love you!!!1-26-05 |
by The Black Halo (4-11-2005 - 12:17 PM)
| It's too cliche to be enjoyable, and the punctuation seemed to be randomly thrown in. |
by DaFriendDatUnevaHad (4-11-2005 - 01:12 PM)
| Dat waz a really good poem.I hope you and him last a very long time.i wish the best for you too.Don't let anyone come between the two of you.Don't listen to what people say.Because people want what you and him have and girl dont let them bother you cuz homegurl bi*chez like to hate.well let em hate.Cuz dey mad but chu happy wit ur man.
Good Luck ! frm da 1 n only CraziA$sRican Ashley ! |
by blackwolf (4-12-2005 - 02:01 AM)
| hmm, i liked it. but you need more transition between the lines of your poem. |
by (guest) (4-13-2005 - 04:41 PM)
| that poem was so sad not sad as in bad but in a touchin way i love it |
by xox_MiSfIt_xox (4-13-2005 - 10:35 PM)
by (guest) (4-14-2005 - 04:44 PM)
| this is a really nice poem to who ever wrote this i hope you have a great life |
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