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My Story(comment plz)
written by ItalianStallionGrl03:17 AM 4/10/05ok, this isnt really a poem its more like a short story, but i hope you like it anyway...
there once was a girl. she was one of those punk/goth kind of people. but she really liked a "gangster" kind of guy. and he liked her too. so he asked her out. and she said yes. but his friends didn't like her. they thought she was bad for his "rep". so they told him to get rid of her. they called her a freak. and deepdown he was a stuck-up prick. so he listened to his friends. he broke up with her. and he broke her heart! but he broke his own heart too. because he still liked her. how can one person be so friggin dumb?! I don't understand how he can live with himself! he sacrificed her love and his own! and guess wut? the girl in the story was my sister... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 11:42 AM)
| awwwwww poor sister!!!!! i hope shes ok!!!! contact darkness_follows_me if u wnna talk! |
by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 03:20 AM)
| my friend went through the same thing except on the other side of that story. he couldnt live w/ the pain and he didnt make it to his 18 birthday. tell your sister that he'll sooner or later realize what he's lost and by then your sister will be so over him |
by queenofhell (4-13-2005 - 03:51 PM)
| that was completely wrong of him! he threw away not only his own life and love but yours too! |
by (guest) (4-14-2005 - 04:37 PM)
| good story/poem man i hope your sister gets over it?????
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by satan_lucifer (4-14-2005 - 04:49 PM)
| You should fuckin slice the pricks throat i would, it offends me to.HAILfuckinSATAN. |
by demented_vampire (4-15-2005 - 12:58 AM)
| aww im sorry about your sis. that guy is an ass |
by ~BrOkEn_InSiDe~ (4-17-2005 - 01:40 PM)
| Wow i feel bad for her it must be hard for her but if hes that much of a prick i dont think she needs him but i know how she feels i was in the same possition but i got over him and i dont fall for the "gangsta or cool" people anymore. If she gets over him through a party and go browse the guys at Hottopic. Hope she feels better. byez |
by ~BrOkEn_InSiDe~ (4-17-2005 - 01:44 PM)
| Wow i feel bad for her it must be hard for her but if hes that much of a prick i dont think she needs him but i know how she feels i was in the same possition but i got over him and i dont fall for the "gangsta or cool" people anymore. If she gets over him through a party and go browse the guys at Hottopic. Hope she feels better. byez |
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