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» Poem: Dont make me(plz comment)
Dont make me(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
03:45 AM 4/10/05
You say you love me,
but u left me there!
You left me at ur house by myself with ur mom,
while you ran the streets around there!
I went to see you!
Not the rest of ur damn family!
I went there hoping,
you wanted to spend a lil time with me.
But you ditched me,
to ride around all day,
Now look at you!
What the hell do you have to say?
I love you with every ounce of my being,
with all my heart,
and if I ever lost you the way I lose everything else,
My world would fall apart.
After I promised never to do it again,
gave my heart to you,
Dont make me regret it!
DONT MAKE ME HURT YOU!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Anthony, Yuo are my boyfriend not ur mom...I went there to spend time with u!

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» Comments / Feedback
by playswithrazorblades (4-10-2005 - 04:30 AM)
sorry, but it sounds more like a letter to him, than a poem..

by playswithrazorblades (4-10-2005 - 04:30 AM)
sorry, but it sounds more like a letter to him, than a poem..

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