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» Poem: last goodbye
last goodbye
written by the_pain_vampiress
06:21 AM 4/10/05
bleeding from the heart
im dying inside
bloody tears run down my cheeks
i want only to cry

this life is done
forever didnt last that long
images flash through my mind
as i try to figure out what went wrong

it doesnt matter now
for me time will soon stand still
my life is fading fast away
and im starting not to feel

on a blood staind piece of paper
i say my last goodbye
im sorry and i love you
all i can do is say i tried


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» Comments / Feedback
by IronicNobility (4-17-2005 - 04:10 PM)
why does this sound like a suicide note? well one thing i have to say about suicide is its retarded. Its a permanent solution to a temporary situation

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