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What The Fuck Did I Do?
written by anotefromacutter10:31 AM 4/10/05It seems like everyone hates me now,
only one left who doesnt hate me, is my beloved.
And I think shes starting to catch up with the rest.
Im up on the roof, going to fall down from above it.
It seems like a nice time to die.
With the stars and the moon shining bright.
For the first time in years, Im crying.
Should I pull the trigger on the left or right side?
All Ive ever failed at, someone has succeeded.
The happy little rich kids paid their way to the top.
I had to thrive and strive to make it 1/10 of the way.
They tell me to kill myself, but I wont do it, not for them.
The way they make fun of me, pushes me towards the edge.
Ive almost tooken the first step off.
This should make them happy, probably not.
Slitting my throat, blood gurgles when I cough. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by untidy_posession (4-10-2005 - 01:12 PM)
| It's very sad, but its also very good. Keep writing, I hope you feel better soon. I know it's not easy. |
by LonelyIsGreen (4-10-2005 - 02:41 PM)
| I liked the entire poem except for the last line...it just doesnt 'fit'. |
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