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Nightmare Revenge
written by Scythe4202:26 PM 4/10/05If I were to die today,
Would anyone really care?
Maybe they would just come to laugh at my coffin,
And write on my gravestone "____Fancyboy____",
What would people think of me then?
If I had a chance to get my revenge,
Even if I went to hell I would,
I would laugh as they fell through the air,
I would point as they screamed to their death,
And laughed harder as they slammed on the concrete,
I would say,"That's what you get,
For manipulating me just for a laugh,
And killing me on the inside,
That's what you get,
For giving me little respect,
You thought I was harmless,
You thought I was dead,
Now I came back,
To haunt you inside your head." |
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don't ask what the 4th line is. You wouldn't wanna know.oh,and please comment.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by PIAID (4-10-2005 - 02:29 PM)
| Hey, can't you haunt some people down for me too? Ok. What I mean is that it's really, really good.. nice one, like it. |
by KiNkY_BloNdE! (4-10-2005 - 02:41 PM)
by untidy_posession (4-10-2005 - 03:32 PM)
| It's really good, i love it. You've displayed alot of emotion. Your a good writer, i love it so much. |
by bloody_tears_girl (4-10-2005 - 06:58 PM)
| i agree with the others, your poem is very good and i loved it. keep writing. :) |
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