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Tears Of Ice
written by Blackhawk10:46 PM 4/10/05Barely dreaming.
Only screaming.
Always crying.
Never denying.
Sin and vice.
With tears of ice.
So softly I dream.
What does it mean?
I lie in thought.
I lost and fought.
My pale cheeks are burning.
I am learning.
I am lighter.
Nor a lover nor a fighter.
My heart is racing.
My soul is pacing.
I start erasing.
What am I facing?
I am flying.
I'm not lying.
If I never cried.
I never died.
Just sin and vice.
With tears of ice.
I love you sweetly.
I kiss your lips.
Hold your fingertips.
Fog swirls.
Darkness unfurls.
Your sweet caress.
In evil's press.
I loath the light.
Hold me tight.
Let me go.
I will never know.
Only sin and vice.
With tears of ice. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DragonTears (4-10-2005 - 10:58 PM)
| i love it man something hit me when i read it.. its beautiful... to me anyways |
by Shinsei_Inori (4-11-2005 - 12:20 AM)
| I agree with DragonTears's comment. This poem is..beautiful. I love it. |
by Shinsei_Inori (4-11-2005 - 12:20 AM)
| I agree with DragonTears's comment. This poem is beautiful. I love it. |
by bLoodXkitty (4-11-2005 - 01:32 AM)
| Its beautiful. Please keep Writing. |
by depressions_slave (4-11-2005 - 02:07 AM)
| good work. I would say what I feel, but I just happen to be having issues right now with my emotions. |
by imbored_ru (4-11-2005 - 12:57 PM)
| omg i love it oo. keep at it dude. its awsome and has a great meaning. |
by depressed_angel (4-12-2005 - 05:07 PM)
| it was touching i loved it |
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