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Daddy's Little Girl(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
11:17 PM 4/10/05
I've always been Daddy's little girl,
but daddy's little girl got a mind of her own,
now daddy hates his little girl,
cuz she never returned home.
He said he would love me forever,
no matter what my mistakes are,
but then I made the biggest mistake of all,
instead of listening to him, I followed my heart!
Daddy's little girl isnt so little anymore,
I am growing up and I have my own life,
He cant control it for me anymore,
it isnt his life...It is mine!!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Daddy this is dedicated to u!!!!!!!!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by smileysabby (4-10-2005 - 11:40 PM)
wow. I love your poem! this is exactly how I feel cuz my dad only cared when he was in complete control! ty for putting this in words.

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