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me then you
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP02:39 AM 4/11/05the enemy of my enemy is my friend
but i'm my own enemy, so here we are again
no time frame of when this will mend
couldn't even tell you when this will end
i'll put the pain of the hours in the letter i'll send
let me at my self, we'll just see then
my own home remidy if i feel today
i guess its my fault if i feel this way
you tell me how i make you cry every day
i don't even flinch when i cause you pain
your little guilt trips don't work,ain't that a shame
i'm getting so sick of these little games
your not relizing that its ME that your trying to tame
the one whos been there for you,since the start of days
i guess everything i've done for you's been lost in your haze
to get to me first, you must go thru the maze
you still try to hurt me,knowing with you my heart stays
i guess the pain you put me thru i just repayed
with me and my enemies, i've got it made |
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its for me and my ex,i guess everything that went wrong is my fault.......
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| » Comments / Feedback | by oxolilmissxox61792 (4-11-2005 - 02:46 AM)
| I like this poem but I have to say that in a few places the rhymes seamed forced and I know you wont like hearing that but I have herd it plenty of times and now I get alot of compliments. Keep up the good work! |
by ~*babygurl*~:# (4-13-2005 - 11:20 AM)
| hey i bet this is about Travis
awsome |
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