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» Poem: Empty
Empty
written by LorienDegwen1
03:37 AM 4/11/05
My heart feels so empty
If you dropped it
It would break
Lonely is this feeling
That I can not escape
I have no one to hold me
Or kiss me in the night
I wish I had someone
That would love me and hold me tight
My heart is sweet and kind
And hardly gives in
I wish for some companion
That loves me for whats within
I wish to be accepted
By someone like me
My heart is really lonely
And it wont let me be
For now my heart is empty
If you dropped it
It would break


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this explains alot right? i was in a bad relationship a few months ago but now i wish i had a bf b/c i am so lonely and all my friends tease me and they dont help the situation

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» Comments / Feedback
by lycan_of_death (4-11-2005 - 03:38 AM)
That is beautiful, really, I love it.

by LorienDegwen1 (4-11-2005 - 03:42 AM)
thank u i write from the heart...i am impulsive that way...thank you again

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-11-2005 - 04:25 AM)
You're never lonely, you always have someone. You shouldent worry so much about having a boyfriend, just make sure your loved by someone and feel it and you'll be fine. Nice job.

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