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Hide sorrow
written by Nug10:21 AM 4/11/05Swallow my pride.
Swallow my sorrow.
One last time.
hide my sorrow.
take his hand.
he's no longer blind.
to see my bitter end.
My dreams are so feeble-minded.
I am lost and narrow-minded. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
narrow-minded:
i guess i am not.
just go out and fuck with your girl.
she lives better than me. I can do nothing
but cry after you. you little fake.
you are narrow-minded. you don't wanna see the real way of live.
Life's hard but you don't need to run away.
I hate you. you let me bleed.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by a_girl_to_fetch13 (4-11-2005 - 11:00 AM)
| I liked it. It was very emtional. I write alot of poems like that, short lines with all my emotion poured into them. Very good work, keep it up. Oh, and thank you very much for your comments on my poems. Im so glad you liked them.
-Holly- |
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