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» Poem: Forgotten Sin
Forgotten Sin
written by brokenxsmile
05:11 PM 4/11/05
Her heart is broken
With everything unspoken
Nothing else matters
Her heart is shattered
Her soul has gone
And she can't go on
The tears she cries
Represent the lies
The lies that he told
The ones he sold
To her; a fool
He used her like a tool
She's just a misfit
And he made her admit it
He used her for sex
And now it's on to the next
He's rid of her; she's alone
He turned her to stone
No more feelings left to feel
She prays this isn't real
As she's left in the rain
With nothing but the pain
She's gone with the wind
Just a forgotten sin
And she finally tries
To say good-bye
And she's broken again
Her; the forgotten sin


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I know it isn't that good, I might improvise it later, as for now, critisize away, please!

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» Comments / Feedback
by lilfukedupdragonlover (4-11-2005 - 05:23 PM)
thats good.

by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 05:56 PM)
this is true for so many so many ways

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