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» Poem: Is It Over?
Is It Over?
written by Tonagamu55
09:02 PM 4/11/05
I made a mistake,
It's one I had to make,
This risk I take,
Will set things straight.

(Chorus:)
Is it over yet?
Can I open my eyes,
To see that he's gone,
To my surprize,
I don't know what to do,
I don't know what to say,
I'm just tired of ever really feeling this way.

I love you and so does he,
Is that the way you want it to be?
To finally be able to see,
What's gonna happen to me.

(Chorus)

Like a man dying in a hospital,
My love is leaving fast,
Out of all of these "I love you"s,
How long will this one last?

Should I do it now?
Should I make the choice?
Should I feel the sadness,
Even inside my voice?
Or should I keep on going,
Loving you day to day?
Knowing someone else I know,
Feels the same exact way.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Please leave some opinoins about this, I hate being ignored!!

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by cutter91 (4-12-2005 - 03:43 AM)
Wasnt your best but it was pretty good ~~Kae~~

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