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dark paradise is coming
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP10:05 PM 4/11/05blood seeps thru the the wood of the stairs
rushing out of my body like cares
as if to be tears
letting me know paradise is near
I've done what they fear
guess that makes me a hero
instead of a burden
to the parents by tothis world i've been broughten
paradise is coming
i know because its getting darker
and it seems my wound is getting larger
the barrel looks friendlier
it would have been quicker
I'll just wait on the steps
as my blood gets thicker |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 10:33 PM)
| WOW... how old are you? that is a GREAT poem. i also write poems. im not a member of zenhex but i have about 40 poems that i have written. and you...really have talent!!! |
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