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HOW CAN YOU (COMMENTS)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP10:09 PM 4/11/05how can you know when somethings wrong
but just not care to ask
how can you say you love me
without knowing all my past
How can i believe what you say is true
and that you'll never hurt me
Oh'wait, you did
i thought i learned not to be so trusting |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by tearsxforxwater (4-12-2005 - 01:25 AM)
| i like this poem....have you ever considered free--versing? i used ta rhyme an it helps get out more emotions in free |
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