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» Poem: Murder= suicide
Murder= suicide
written by gcgothichick
11:01 PM 4/11/05
I'll murder her with my bloody hands
And hope she goes to the devil's land
When she dies
no one will cry
Cause she was a liar
a loser, a suck up as the they would qualify her

She's talking shit about how the world is so cruel
And how she rests in a depression pool

It was her fucking fault
that the world once loved her
but then it did a summersault
Her life was once on it's way to perfection
but now it's headed in the oppositte direction

Now she screams and pleas
As I slit her throat and she begins to bleed
Only a couple moments till its over and she'll be gone
So the world can start over
and know right from wrong

Five years later ashes are everywhere
And no one cares
Does anyone even remember she was even there?

Black roses in her hair
Blood is everywhere
Instead of crying
About how she's dying
We sing and party
She says she's sorry
But we all tell her it's too late
Cause she caused so much pain
and now its time for her to suffer the same fate.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this when i was really pissed at this girl, and i was imaging everyone seeing her for who she really was. (a biotch) but still everyone thinks she's miss perfect, when she really just ruined my life. i never really murdered her.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Ruined_Hopes (4-11-2005 - 11:10 PM)
there are people like that in my skool, and i wish people could see who they really are. and personally i think you should have killed her! lol

by xJoey_Jordison6sic6x (4-16-2005 - 04:01 PM)
that was really good... you are very talented... keep it up..

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