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» Poem: Lonliness Tastes Bitter
Lonliness Tastes Bitter
written by chaoticthoughts
01:16 AM 4/12/05
Dreams of love
High hopes for lust
No longer can go on as one

The solitude of life has brought me down low
Searching for that other one to bring me back up
Everyday is a new opportunity to find love, with every yesterday leaving a taste of bitter defeat from Fate
The lonliness has dulled my feelings, no longer to see the brightside of life
I see dim faint points that have to be made in order to just exist in this demeanor world
They say when life gives you lemons, make lemonade
That old clique` doesn't apply anymore when your lonely
You just wanna suck the sour juice and pout your lips making everything horrble for everyone else just as you are.

Dreams for love
High hopes for lust
No longer can go on as one


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» Comments / Feedback
by LadyAngele (4-12-2005 - 01:20 AM)
^_^ Hehe, I liked it! That's pretty deep! Good job!

by perfect.flaws (4-12-2005 - 01:24 AM)
wow that was really deep. Effing amazing. oh and thanks for the comment.. it was to the guy who wrote ..> "23) you all on zenhex suck ass" .

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