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who's your little girl now?
written by bloody_tears_girl
06:23 AM 4/12/05
im sorry for,
telling you to back off before.
but now i need you here,
to wipe away my tears.

can't you see,
don't you care what happens to me?
i need you to catch my fall,
don't you care at all?

why can't you hust love me?
you said you'd watch over me.
and you told me that you cared,
how come you were'nt there?
i'm sorry i cant make you proud,
dad, who's your little girl now?

i know that i made some mistakes,
is that why you caused heartaches?
you told me you'd never leave,
then you left and took everything.
my dreams, my hope, my love for you,
what is it that i can do?

but now im growing up,
and what you said is not enough,
you had your chance to make things right,
but then you walked out of my life.
and then you come back, and expect everything to be okay,
well it's not, you should have thought of that before you walked away.

so i'm sorry i couldn't make you proud,
dad, who's your little girl now?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for my dad who walked out on me when i was 5.

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