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walk on by
written by omegadrax03:16 PM 8/6/04forgive me.
as you walked by,
i took a quick
peek at your ass.
when you noticed
out of the corner
of your eye.
you turned as if
to say something.
when you did, i
couldn't help but stare
at you breasts.
so nice and round.
you could see the
desire in my eyes.
you smiled.
you liked the attention.
i will see you tomorrow.
same time, same place.
a different tight skirt.
a different revealing shirt.
the same need for attention.
the same urge to give it. |
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attention give is attention deserved
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-6-2004 - 03:30 PM)
| Do you cheat on your wife? If not it sure looks like it. |
by Rise to Demise (8-6-2004 - 03:33 PM)
| I don't know if you meant for that poem to be funny, but I laughed. I also thought it was cute. ;] |
by Goblin (8-6-2004 - 04:55 PM)
| "Anonymous" - back the fuck off! I don't know of any "taken" guy who has suddenly stopped checking out other chicks just because they're attached. As it is, I don't know of any "taken" chick who has stopped looking at other guys just because they're attached. If you're going to say something like that, have the balls to post who you are!
As for the poem, I think it's good. It let's chicks look a bit into the male brain...lol. |
by SuperBob (8-9-2004 - 04:04 AM)
| nicely said Greane....but more importantly.....very nice poem omegadrax!!!! i enjoyed that one....sounds like a very appealing woman |
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