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Hell (Comments are Welcome)
written by True_Darkness06:35 PM 4/12/05Here I Rot,
In this Hell Of my Own Creation,
Boiling Hot,
Surrounded by a Zombie Nation.
Time To Think,
On the Verge,
On the Brink,
Of this Breakdown,
With this Urge,
To Slowly Drown.
My Thoughts Contract,
To a Point of No return,
And the Ebing Fires Distract,
Me from the lessons i should Learn.
Here i Rot,
Controlled by my own Machination,
hear the Shot,
I Dreamt up in my fascination. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Arson (4-12-2005 - 06:40 PM)
I must say....
I really like it....
Its pretty catchy and your descriptions are pretty wicked ;)
**hugs** |
by bloodlyvalentine (4-12-2005 - 07:45 PM)
love it! its pretty gripping |
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