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» Poem: Hell (Comments are Welcome)
Hell (Comments are Welcome)
written by True_Darkness
06:35 PM 4/12/05
Here I Rot,
In this Hell Of my Own Creation,
Boiling Hot,
Surrounded by a Zombie Nation.

Time To Think,
On the Verge,
On the Brink,
Of this Breakdown,
With this Urge,
To Slowly Drown.

My Thoughts Contract,
To a Point of No return,
And the Ebing Fires Distract,
Me from the lessons i should Learn.

Here i Rot,
Controlled by my own Machination,
hear the Shot,
I Dreamt up in my fascination.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Somthing randum, Kinda average i know

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» Comments / Feedback
by Arson (4-12-2005 - 06:40 PM)
I must say.... I really like it.... Its pretty catchy and your descriptions are pretty wicked ;) **hugs**

by bloodlyvalentine (4-12-2005 - 07:45 PM)
love it! its pretty gripping

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