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Schizophrenic Anxiety
written by untidy_posession06:43 PM 4/12/05Obscure clouds of hostility hang over concluded anxiety,
Qualm terror consumes the mind, caging in,
Afraid of society and disturbed thoughts control,
Delusions, disintegration of the soul,
Erratic changes discipline,
Bound to sadness. |
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Own experiences inspired it. It's not very good, sorry...but comments welcome, as always.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by .Ebony.Rose. (4-12-2005 - 06:49 PM)
| i like it, i cant say quite why but i do. Its an odd poem, and i think 'cos of that i admire it! well done.... |
by bloodlyvalentine (4-12-2005 - 07:42 PM)
| i think its pretty good. nicely done! |
by ballerinalovely (4-13-2005 - 12:44 PM)
| Your poems are very interesting.....I dare to ponder whether you really are schizo.....but that is for you...not me. Good job. |
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